例1
Some students like to live off campus, like renting an apartment; while others prefer living on campus, like living in dormitories. Which do you prefer and why? Include details and examples
T---Topic: off campus rent an apartment
S---Supporting ideas won’t bother others
ü music loud,
ü snore
privacy
ü books, movies etc
T---transitions First, because, Also, Finally
Sample Answer:
“Some students like to live off campus, like renting an apartment to live in ; while others prefer living on campus, like in the dormitories.
Choose a position
Personally speaking, I prefer living off campus like rent an apartment. First, because I am really crazy about listening to music loud, so I don’t want to bother others. And also, I snore very heavily at night when I am sleeping. You see, a person like me has no choice but to live off campus. Second, I want to have my own privacy. I can’t imagine that 5 or 6 people stick together. I don’t want my roommates to know whom I am calling , dating; what books I am reading or what movies I am watching. I would rather die if I have to live on campus”
T: on campus
S: share experience
ü campus life , classmates, teachers
Convenient
ü near to teaching building&dinning hall 5 'minutes
safer
T: First, because, Also, Finally
例2
Some people prefer having meals at Chinese restaurants, but some others prefer American-style fast food like KFC and McDonald’s. Which do you prefer and explain why.
T– Topic American
S– Supporting fast service
idea Am 30 chi 1hr
tastes good
French fries hamberg
Sign of fashion
KFC ,mac
T—Transition First, because, Also, finally
“I think American style fast food would be better. First, because of its fast service, I can save a lot of time. For example, If I have fast food, it only takes about 30 minutes, while if I have Chinese food, it will be an hour ” Another reason is that it tastes good. French fries and Hamburg are my favorite. Finally, eating fast food is a sign of fashion. You see, How can you be fashionable without having fast food in KFC or McDonald’s
Chinese food
T– Topic Chinese
S– Supporting nutritious
idea nutrition
a variety of choices
Sichuan ants climbing trees
Chinese food culture
Interesting food’s names
T—Transition First, because, Also, finally
“I think Chinese food would be better. Firstly, they are nutritious which have a lot of body-building nutrition and vitamin we really need. Also, there is a large variety of choices , like, if you like spicy food, you can choose “sichuan” style restaurant. By the way, my f
